Peter's Music Prompt

Hit me baby one more time – Britney Spears

Hit me baby one more time – Britney Spears

Peter's Music Prompt

Write a Poem inspired by the music video

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Song Suggested by Samantha and Peter

Lyrics

Lyrics:

Oh baby, baby
Oh baby, baby
Oh baby, baby, how was I supposed to know
That something wasn't right here
Oh baby, baby, I shouldn't have let you go
And now you're out of sight, yeah
Show me how want it to be
Tell me baby 'cause I need to know now, oh because
My loneliness is killing me (and I)
I must confess I still believe (still believe)
When I'm not with you I lose my mind
Give me a sign
Hit me baby one more time
Oh baby, baby
The reason I breathe is you
Boy you got me blinded
Oh pretty baby
There's nothing that I wouldn't do
It's not the way I planned it
Show me how you want it to be
Tell me baby 'cause I need to know now, oh because
My loneliness is killing me (and I)
I must confess I still believe (still believe)
When I'm not with you I lose my mind
Give me a sign
Hit me baby one more time
Oh baby, baby
Oh baby, baby
Yeah,
Oh baby, baby how was I supposed to know
Oh pretty baby, I shouldn't have let you go
I must confess, that my loneliness is killing me now
Don't you know I still believe
That you will be here
And give me a sign
Hit me baby one more time
My loneliness is killing me (and I)
I must confess I still believe (still believe)
When I'm not with you I lose my mind
Give me a sign
Hit me baby one more time
I must confess, that my loneliness is killing me now
Don't you know I still believe
That you will be here
And give me a sign
Hit me baby one more time
Songwriters: Martin Karl Sandberg

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Mitch Bensel
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was walking inside myself
invisible to the way of know
I didn’t see ..
couldn’t hear
walls between thought and soul are thick
sometimes I slow in reach
but now you ..
you .. washed away
like an ocean’s wave slamming me
to the sands of alone..
.. walking outside in the cold
reaching .. waiting .. hoping
one more ..
give me one more kiss
to carry us…back together
again.

Coffee & Lyrics
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His kiss was a drug
toxic and dangerous
she wanted more
his touch was her addiction
thrill tingling in her veins
a poison paradise
without him
she’s lost
slipping under
toxic

BluePoet@dactyllate
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Oh baby. I couldn’t have known
you wanted me, but your needs…
You shoulda told me everything
& I coulda been that way, freed.
It wasn’t how I planned it, baby.
I couldn’t stand it, baby, lettin you go.
Come back to me, but I’m takin a stand.
You hit me, baby, you lose your hand.

Samantha Leboeuf
Noble Member

My loneliness,
killing me
I’m hurt
you broke up with me
Hit me baby
one more time
its killing me
losing my mind
your not the man for me
this much I can see

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Hit me baby one more time – Britney Spears

by Peter
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